Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era, technology has raised like a jet and people are using plethora of technologies for all the possibility of ways and people are using gadgets to share the communication to all over the world. Even though, technology has improved certain point of time that we need to use physical letters by different section of people. I am of the opinion that this mater should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
To begin with, Everyone are really getting mesmerised that how we are using current technologies on 21st centuries, so many gadgets which are available for communication that people are current using their regular routine life such as Facebook, Gmail,Yahoo and Hotmail. Secondly, fastest communication really matter in this competitive world, business people who are all using day to day communication they can not plan it for physical communication letter and they have to extend their business around in this world for that communication is highly playing in pivotal role. For instance, In India, one of the survey is saying there are 74% sectors people who currently using modern technologies for communication.
On the other hand, past decades, people were generally use physical letters and physical card for communication purpose, specially for birthday wishes, functions and celebrations that they have spent some money to buy physical greeting card and they have exposed their love via greeting card. Still, many of the schools who are expecting formal physical letter from students rather than modern communications in order to misuse the technologies on younger age. For example, In India, there are many schools still following leave letters should be physical letters only. Government office and banking sectors still who are all using physical letters as a formal communication and they do not want to change the system.
To conclude this, government has to take a responsibility to educate student to how to use modern communication apart from that modern communication that highly important for the fastest way of communications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , the fastest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, second, secondly, so, still, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29305135952 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93390030734 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510574018127 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.553251279 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.272727273 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121406689947 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568757012742 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361795810677 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929323435216 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324406248518 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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