What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your county to live or study abroad?
These days many Iranian people leave their country to study or live in foreign countries. So, there are many different opinions on this subject. Some people believe that immigrate can be a good answer to the bad situation that there are in Iran but some people don’t agree. I will discuss both of these views and ate the end I will discuss my opinion.
Immigration can have a good result for people who leave their country. First, in many countries which are face on trouble situation like Iran that in these days has a bad economic situation one of the best ways for individuals to have a good life is immigration. Second, in my country because of the economy and political reasons some people cannot study in a good educational institute and there is not any full founded post-education university. So, in this situation, many of good student take a found from the good university around the world and immigrate to other countries that we call this phenomenon “Brains Scape”.
Nowhere can be lovely like home. First of all, most people love their hometown and their families because of any things that are familiar to them for instance, culture, mother tongue, climate pattern and etc. In many cases, immigration can lead to “Homesick” which is a psycho illness and when people cannot find anything familiar in the new country. Finally, when people immigrate they lost their friends and families and they have to find a new friend in their new county that is very hard for some people because finding a new friend is a social ability that may some people don’t have this.
In conclusion, I think leaving your county and live or study in the new county can improve people’s social abilities and I believe that home is where the heart is.
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85197368421 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69487810267 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4686430215 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916161350359 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433434351137 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082160633475 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990281150285 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106353979625 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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