The graph below compares in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at the graph provided reveals the downward trend in the figures of the children born over 80 years period, from 1920 to 2000 in two selected countries, namely the USA and China.
As an overall trend, it is clear that both China and the USA experienced a similar downward trend over the given period though China decreased at a faster pace. Another outstanding feature is that the birth rate of the USA was generally greater than that of China.
As regards to the trend for the USA, it can be clearly seen that a fluctuation took place between 1920 and 1935, although the birth rate always remained above 10%. After a 10 year period of a slight fluctuation, it plunged to below 5%. Then, the birth rate in American rose again, reaching a peak of 15% in 1950. After that, this figure hit the lowest point 2% in 2000.
The trend for China has been similar during this period, although the fertility rate was a bit higher in the 1930s. In spite of a slight oscillation, it plunged by 10% to 5%. This was followed by a 5 year period of stability. Then, apart from a substantial growth to 20%, the birth rate in China has declined gradually to 7% in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...though China decreased at a faster pace.Another outstanding feature is that the birth r...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'births'.
Suggestion: births
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, apart from, as regards, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47887323944 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43408101349 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553990610329 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1592775051 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217412713509 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752898471503 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614132169859 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137137293909 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292134303251 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.