The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University:
A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its professors for the purpose of enhancing morale among the faculty and luring new professors.
In the statement the faculty committee of Seatown University narrates that Oceania University has a higher retention when professors are offered free tuition fee at the university for their own college age student.As a result if Seatown University also follows the same policy it will increase bonding among faculty and luring new professor.
Superficially the statement is right.But if we analyze the statement is is quite perplexing.What is suitable for Oceania University perhaps not be so appropriate for Seatown University.The amount of professors with college aged children may be different form Oceania University to Seatown University.
The income and the facilities that the professors of Oceania University is not compared with Seatown University.Perhaps the facilities that the professors get from Oceania University is quite higher along with the free tuition fee.So only providing free tuition fee policy for the professors may not be so effective for Seatown University.
In conclusion,the basic conditions and facilities of the two different universities should be analyzed before taking a free tuition policy in Seatown University.The best possible scheme should be evaluated after proper critiquing of the different events of the two universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 2260.96107784 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 441.139720559 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74468085106 5.12650576532 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30094229108 2.78398813304 119% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 204.123752495 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59920159681 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.8473053892 206% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.6692707062 57.8364921388 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 270.0 119.503703932 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 23.324526521 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.70786347227 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418455083981 0.218282227539 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265907156187 0.0743258471296 358% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148393821107 0.0701772020484 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265907156187 0.128457276422 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148393821107 0.0628817314937 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 14.3799401198 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.61 48.3550499002 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 12.197005988 207% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 12.5979740519 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32208582834 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 98.500998004 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 12.3882235529 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.1389221557 187% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.9071856287 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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