You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a restaurant opened near by recently.Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say
What problem do you experience?
What should the management do about it?
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that lot of noise coming from your restaurant which one recently opened and we are facing lot of troubles due to this problem.
Firstly, your restaurant open until 12.00 Am and also bar is available in order to that pleathoa of younger people are coming daily by bike and car and they are making lot of noises on the street so that we are unable to study for my examination and also we are unable to sleeo properly as a result next day we are unable to go to college.
I am requsting you to reduce the restaurant timings up to 9 pm rather than 12.00 Am on weekdays only but you can continue the same timings on weekend that really help us to study and sleep well. My kind request you to take action right away to change the timings.
I hope you take action at the earliest.
your sincerly,
john.
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| 2018-09-03 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...ope you take action at the earliest. your sincerly, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, really, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31481481481 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21257335965 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.628005295 44.8134815571 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.5 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177108714292 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804148188505 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576662039297 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111716626569 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537371793159 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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