In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high schools and starting university studies. Discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do so.
Before embarking on college, many young people are advised that a year working or travelling may be a good option. This essay will suggest that saving money is the biggest advantage and a reduced motivation to study is the major disadvantage of this.
Tertiary education is very expensive in most of the countries. The students drop out to save some money after high school to work for 12 months before beginning their college studies. This allows them to pay for their accommodation, tuition fees, basic necessities and relieve them from the stress of part-time jobs, thereby helping them focus on their studies rather than struggling financially on the top of their academic work. The Times recently reported that the average tuition fees for universities in the U.K. are $12,000 per annum and many drop out because they cannot afford to stay. Talking of travelling, it gives a break to a student from the regular curriculum and also gain the experience of the outside world. Travelling and working for a year before entering college, helps a student to broaden their horizons.
Despite these advantages, many students get used to travelling or working that they do not want to return to their study life after taking a year off. This short term view can cause them to bypass university altogether and go straight into jobs that they may not be capable of or that may not provide the same career opportunity as it would have been after the third level education. For instance, a recent survey found that almost a quarter of students who take a gap-year never enter the college.
In conclusion, taking a break from education can be advantageous if it helps people gather some savings, however, they should also be careful that it does not lead to demotivate them to continue their college studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, talking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92786885246 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57844203797 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0514158515 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229772560322 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847045315591 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605564648303 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131408903953 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351234041181 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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