You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from
a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the
University. In your letter,
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Mr Paul,
I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen which has just opened near
my University residence. Although I am pleased that we have this facility, the restaurant remains open
up to midnight each night, and as a result there is considerable talking, shouting and the sound of
motorbikes continuing until about 12.30 each night.
This causes me and my neighbours in the residence a serious problem, because at that time we are
either trying to sleep, or in some cases trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise and
commotion disturbs us, making us tired in the mornings or affecting the progress of our studies. I am
sure you will appreciate that this is a very worrying situation for us all.
I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11pm at the latest
on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend. I propose that we also put up some signs
reminding users to be considerate and to keep their noise to an absolute minimum. These are simple
steps which would make us all very grateful indeed.
Thank you for your attention to this important matter.
Kind Regards,
David
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-24 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-24 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-02-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2018-09-07 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ving it at midnight during the weekend. I propose that we also put up some signs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91262135922 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63625755525 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674757281553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8672698559 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172855345911 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571525556254 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484326235009 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549890514179 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432456682788 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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