Computer are becoming an assential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... part of school lessons. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from...
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...this question from both point of views. On one side of the argument there are pe...
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...able about weight it is disadvantages. the main reason for believing this is that ...
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...s is that its very important of nature. because all people are usesing everyday. Where...
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... is that its very important of nature. because all people are usesing everyday. Where...
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...nature. because all people are usesing everyday. Wherever this is increasing knowledge...
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...ecause all people are usesing everyday. Wherever this is increasing knowledge day by day...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 458.0 1615.20841683 28% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 93.0 315.596192385 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9247311828 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.10542279907 4.20363070211 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87312149894 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 176.041082164 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720430107527 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 145.8 506.74238477 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3108891325 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.25 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.625 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999348110974 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385962498896 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829634125904 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889589771492 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889589771492 0.056905535591 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.07 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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