One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.
Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter
• give your opinion of your friend's business idea
• tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer
• And explain your reasons for this decision.
Dear Tom,
I appreciate your consideration of involving me as a partner in a new venture. I have always been fascinated by technology innovation and ponder that it is going to contribute in every area, particularly about your business conception, IOT (Internet of things) is certainly a captivating idea and transfiguring a whole sector. Though technology is new, many companies provide sensors to capture the facts from automation and it has more or less become stable.
Initially, I was quite excited to be part of this opportunity but when I checked my financial rigidity, it is not as sound as I expected. I discussed with my wife about her bank statement, however, she is also not confident of investing such large sum of money for five years.
Therefore, I dropped the plan to participate on your ambition. I believe that after gaining some financial conciliation, such idea may be considered in future at my end.
I wish best of luck for this endeavor and looking forward to hearing success.
With Love,
Pappu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, I appreciate your consideration of invol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03390343252 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71511627907 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.798013923 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136792677216 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524852006132 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611093034231 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672769410616 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648528810924 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.