Children who are bought up in families which have not enough money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are bought up by wealthy parents. Discuss.
whenever we talk talk about poverty and prosperity we think that both are different , do you think it's ture ? If the answer is yes ! then you are not well aware of their effacts because both are same in some espacts . Both have their pros and cons if a child born in poor family then he deprive from his basic needs since his childhood . On the other side when a child born in rich family got all his basic needs since his childhood like food, education, residents, and always find himself child who born with golden spoon.
Furthermore, a child who born in poor family never get all opportunities which a rich child get in his life .A sarway took place in our area on this topic .Mostly people said that a child who brought up in poor family is better in all espacts then the other child who have all facilities of life .
Because he is more emotionally strong then a rich child .He better know how to cope uo with difficult situation ,
In short , I strongly emphasis that poor children are better then rich children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46774193548 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25720265807 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7027818237 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160406391277 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678031811138 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066050151525 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110002132934 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639079008714 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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