Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Some people wondered if the traditional music of a country was more important than the international music. In my opinion, music has lots varieties and each of all plays a major role in our life.
First of all, we need to know how music is important for our life. The first reason, music is always the good way to relax. The songs can be a good medicine for your mind, even that someone looks music as an escapism from unpleasant realities. The second reason is that music can make listener focus on doing something. In addition, it’s magical that songs can make a change people's feeling, they can make us be sad or happy or cheerful by their lyrics and melodies.
Next, I want to say any kinds of music have the specific beauty. In the modern life, it so important to connect with each others and international music can do that easily. We can learn more many languages because our brains tend to get a new language naturally while the song playing so it is the good method to study English. Nowadays, Youngers prefer international music and the sad reality that the traditional songs be forgotten. We need to know the roles of them, which perform historic stories and cultures, including stirring our patriotism.
Generally, music has no a language barrier. All kinds of music over the world have marvelous roles and all the songs always convey feelings in greater depth and detail.
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...to know the roles of them, which perform historic stories and cultures, including...
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... our patriotism. Generally, music has no a language barrier. All kinds of music ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71721311475 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52422753942 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9223731384 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396182469909 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157888746622 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123594571788 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263274495843 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995342393961 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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