large shopping malls are replacing small shops? are you agree or disagree ?
The importance of large shopping malls are replacing small shops, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. the substantial influence of large shopping malls are replacing small shops has sparked the controversy over the potential effect of this trend on in recent years. It can be agreed that it has some great impact, but it has some drawbacks. In this essay, I shall further elaborate both the sides which would lead to plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why large shopping malls are replacing small shops, but the most conspicuous one is that if large shopping malls are converted in small shops than it is easy to buy good items for middle class public and lower class, which is helpful to those people who do not have more money to go mall for buy good things. As an example, Buy things in shopping malls than it is good quality and if people buy cloaths, grocery and other regular life item in small shops than quality is not very much good compare by malls, thus plays a vital role in large shopping malls are replacing small shops is good or bad for humans.
However, It has some disadvantages and some people tend to believe that If people buy things in shops than it is not in good quality and quantity also so it is better to buy things in mall because in mall they are cleaning and shifting all items day by day so it is fresh, hence, is not always worth.
In conclusion, the effect of large shopping malls are replacing small shops is prominent, however, It has some demerits that should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41778064872 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3955664652 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.75 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.9669160288 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490060401077 0.242375264174 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250606078956 0.0925447433944 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159165958848 0.071462118173 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329980631198 0.151781067708 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132498580302 0.0609392437508 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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