You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say. Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute. What problems have you encountered with parking? What are your recommendations to solve them?
Dear Mr Robin,
I am writing to you to bring your attention towards the problem I am facing to park my bike near the office building.
A couple of weeks ago, I was watching a TV program on the active transportation and the benefits it offers. Being a health conscious person, I grab the opportunity to commute to work via bicycle which not only improves my health but also saves a lot of my time due to traffic congestion problem in the city centre and money I was spending on the fuel as well.
Firstly, since, I began bicycling to work, I am facing a parking issue near our corporate park, mostly because of the cars parked over there. Despite having a dedicated car parking in the premises, people are parking their vehicles outside which is disappointing indeed. Furthermore, due to the lack of parking area for bicycles, I have to park it in the other building wasting my time every day.
I would like to suggest to the administration department to facilitate a parking lot allotted for bikes. In addition, signboard can also be put for public awareness of vehicle parking. Taking such measures can certainly improve the parking problem.
I would be waiting for your kind action to resolve this matter as early as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Kaplan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80454545455 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73037323759 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640909090909 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.515143093 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221951774352 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682643293825 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05529254787 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104060003233 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504810293947 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.