Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Crime has been a disturbing issue of all walks of life, especially nowadays, these unlawful actions are on the increase. There are a lot of factors which contribute to the rise in the crime rate, so finding the right key to solve this issue is a must.
In order to solve this disturbingly rising issue, we must first understand what caused it. To begin with, people with few or no education have a high chance to commit a crime as early as a child or later in their life. If a person is not taught with the basic knowledge of morality and law, he or she will be more prone to breaking a law. In addition, greed, one of the largest sins which people have, also leads a person to do wrong things. For instance, there are many cases which involve law enforcers being bribed and turn corrupted had been brought out to justice.
With the above-mentioned reason for crime in mind, there are now several solutions to combat the issue. At first, prison sentences will be the perfect and instant punishment for evildoers. Because this will take away the offender freedom and making sure that they learn that unlawful actions have consequences. However, for the long-term solution, it would be wise to invest in education due to some advantages it has on our society like create the workforce needed for future development, reduce the illiteral and poverty rate. Nevertheless, building a good education system for the future generation acts as a deterrent to future crime as well as help contribute to the national wealth.
In conclusion, wrongdoings are caused mostly by illiteracy and people’s greed, so the key to prevent it for the short term is by punishing the offender and for the long-term should be by education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77926421405 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68689083022 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3643387172 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188069305407 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633298655541 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512322813723 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11031741397 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332823523391 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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