Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced?
Computer games are excessively played by youngsters and children which is becoming an area of concern for the doctors. Due to increasing use of these games many children are prone to various mental and physical problems. However, there are few ways in which this problem can be diminished.
Admittedly, these games cause serious stress on the brain of the children and reduces their thinking capacity. Even though these games are fun to play, but harmful radiations are released from computer screens which directly impact the entire body and have neurological effects. In addition, it also results in underdevelopment of the children as they spend all their day on games which refrain their mind from thinking creatively.
It causes two major physical problems on the children and youngsters. Whereas chances of obesity are more in these kids, as compares to other kids who do not play much games . In instance, in European countries rate of obesity is high due to investment of much time on computer screens according to a research paper. Another impact is impairment of body parts, such as limbs due to restrictive use these parts which had a critical impact on the life.
In order to minimize these problems, government involvement can be helpful. If government can launch various free medical check-ups then it will help children and their parents to realize the current health condition. Furthermore, celebrity involvement can also help here as impact of the message compared by celebrities is high because people believe their words. Some popular faces can involve in voluntary camps to guide children about the ill effects of computer games.
To conclude, increased usage of computer is becoming a critical issue and it need to be controlled as early as possible. There are multitude of effects like, deafness and heath issue which arise from these games. Although, government support can ameliorate the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, whereas, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22508038585 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73388042043 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2934542168 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329834483898 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10104203567 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743027427573 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180720549156 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955710313843 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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