some people believe that trade and cultural relationships between the countries is a positive development,while others disagree.
Nowadays, international relationship is an effective and essential science in countries politic and economic plans. A lot of scientists try to achieve a suitable algorithm for trade and cultural relationships between countries in all over the world and a lot of students are studying international relationship in universities.
Economic researches show that when countries have limited sources and productions to increase their economic powerful, they should have international trade with other countries from all over the world. A lot of international economic and trade organizations have been created to facilitate trade communications between countries. Some of them are global like WTO (world trade organization)and some others have limited relationship between several countries like OPEC and G8.For cultural relationship between countries there are several international organizations too. UN is the biggest one and it is responsible for peace and good communication between countries from all over the world.
It is undeniable that majority of countries specially in undeveloped areas can eliminate their lack of resources and facilities with import productions and needs from other countries, and without trade relationship with other countries their economy become weak and weaker .Even developed governments need these relationships to sell their productions and goods to improve their income .By expand cultural relationship between countries people from all over the world can improve their knowledge and culture to achieve a more peaceful world.
Although some political and economic experts believe that by developing trade and cultural relationship, some countries become stronger because they have more resources in their countries and by devise a plan they can increase their income, but in other countries governments try to vanish their problems by import most of productions and facilities and they cannot utilize their money to improve their capabilities and they are dependent countries.
In conclusion, in this century and by this level of communication between countries, most of governments and organizations try to use best methods of relationship to develop their economic and cultural situation. Having good and powerful relationship helps countries to improve their situation but it is very important that they should spend their income to expand their industries and services to achieve self-sufficiency in economy. I think good and peaceful relationship can be complete by more independency methods in economy and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81167108753 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22456971403 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424403183024 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.661497869 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.181818182 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2727272727 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306381065178 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138985889131 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806097463644 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196668958082 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545504484807 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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