Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, technology is easing our lives but some challenges are arising. Obesity is one of such issues and has become a major concern in the modern world as more number of cases in children are reported everyday. In order to deal with this, a group of people advocate to provide physical education trainings in the school, However, I believe that this cannot be a sole solution. Undoubtedly, Former advice can help, but food we intake daily is major concern and i feel that is should be healthy.
Admittedly, games and exercises not only help children to stay fit but also help them to grow as human. They can learn many qualities such as leadership etcetera which shall build their character. Furthermore, physical education will decrease stress levels in children, ultimately, health care system will get an ease and funds saved can be use to construct more sports centre.
Despite the games and sports, if we are not eating healthy, eventually, we will start gaining weight. In order to stop this, everyone should keep a note of calories intake so that they can keep a track of their health. Further more, establishments should spend some revenue on food industry and do quality check of various restaurants and supply license who is maintaining adequate quality.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that physical training is secondary solution of the obesity but the primary solution is food quality. Hence is can be concluded that in order to reduce strain on health care system, funds should be allocated to food authorities departments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, well, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98098859316 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62330962462 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9662674894 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191062327161 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586157192742 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646494213368 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104528026606 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392324981261 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.