On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you want them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am your insurance holder and my insurance id is 18325. I am writing to make a claim on my travel insurance because I have lost my bag during my recent travel from Ankara to London.
I have lost my bag at the airport including near 600 dollars money on cash and my mobile phone and also some unimportant pages such as my class notes. My mobile phone brand was Apple and I bought that last summer with 650 dollars from Apple store branch in my hometown.
When I arrived at London airport on 25th September from my hometown. I have sat on a desk near restroom to waiting for my friend who came from another country to London. Afterwhile, I could not find my bag on the desk. It is notable I had airport police report about situations and camera on the airport.
I think my insurance policy covers all items such as my money and mobile phone; therefore, I want to give my lost items costs.
Thank you for your time and support.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ecent travel from Ankara to London. I have lost my bag at the airport includi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m Apple store branch in my hometown. When I arrived at London airport on 25th Sep...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46315789474 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31413816724 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2891701222 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171301213599 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739197541901 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676826149515 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116593507418 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680857932458 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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