You have a pen friend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country. Briefly describe ONE news story that has been on TV, on the radio or in newspapers in your country and explains why people are interested in it.
Dear Jay,
First of all, thank you for responding to my letter. I am a bit surprised at your question about major news stories which all of the media is covering nowadays but I will apprise you the most hyped news story in my country.
The general elections of the national assembly are scheduled to be held in the mid of next month and there is quite hustle and bustle in every constituency. The prospective candidates are using every means of the media to persuade voters to vote in their favour so that they can be elected as a member of the upper house. Most prominently used media for the election campaign is electronic media and the contestants appearing in the news with all the problems or their vision for their respective locality.
Few candidates, who do not belong to the affluent class are resorting to a low-cost medium for disseminating of their agenda. All the media including TV, newspaper, or radio holding special transmissions to present the comparative performance of outgoing cabinet members versus the goals of aspiring candidates.
I am supporting the conservative party this time as other the party could not deliver to their promises, even being in the office for two consecutive terms.
I will keep you posted after the election on the results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...question about major news stories which all of the media is covering nowadays but I will a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90825688073 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78483816872 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5674781146 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.888888889 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102731214394 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404324665176 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697732488564 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559758086118 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731392157996 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.