You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of the food and the behavior of the staff.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. Explain what was wrong with the meal and the service and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that we are a group of ten people belonging to local "Environmental Watch" group. Our recent experience of dinner and staff service was totally absurd and the image we carry in our minds for your restaurant has been shattered.
Although, we do not shift from our preference for food, this time we decided some additional items, but what surprised us that we were served with old veggies salad and pasta with an unpleasant sauce. Our team members were dismayed at the situation and didn't intake the food. Furthermore, we called the barista at least 5-times to bring our drinks and when he brought the drinks weren't that we ordered. It seems that the staff is not properly trained or require further training.
I must say that we had a totally unsatisfactory experience at your restaurant, contrary to what we used to have. Unless the food quality and service staff are improved, we will not be returning to the restaurant.
Thanking you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'veggies'' or 'veggie's'?
Suggestion: veggies'; veggie's
...rprised us that we were served with old veggies salad and pasta with an unpleasant sauc...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...bers were dismayed at the situation and didnt intake the food. Furthermore, we called...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...r drinks and when he brought the drinks werent that we ordered. It seems that the staf...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88428253536 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8368376871 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167794718665 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731067242552 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337085403404 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110837434892 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151899507551 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.