Some people think that the students should not wear uniform. What is your opinion?
In this day and age, the majority of school requires that students have to wear same clothes when they go to. In fact, it is undeniable that the homogeneous clothes play an indispensable roll for each undergraduate but it could provide the school kid both pros and cons thus this essay will clarify both sides for comparisons.
At a glance, it is realized that getting ready and choosing what to wear each daily morning in several minutes which is impossible so the same outfit acts as a catalyst for tremendous time saving when overload pupils spend no time preparing for school or find it stress to figuring out whole night about accoutrements next day. Furthermore, an enormous amount of money to buy brand clothes casual might hundreds dollar per going shopping while uniform also just have affordable prices, there by an increasing number of student spends a part of budget to purchase them; especial is middle-class learners whom have financial issue. More beneficially, it is recognized that school outfit could create the environment where discipline is emphasize, hence school would built punishment which could be applied to other vital aspects of life in the future.
Despite all merits mentioned above, some students find it inappropriate by uniform which is a trouble when they want to express personality with peers that could limit the dynamic and creation; in this way, people are entering the pre-adulthood who extremely want to rebel about dressing such as shoes, styling of hair and so forth. Apparently, the color and form of same outfit generate learners would not be excited to wear it everyday, notably they enjoy outdoor activities such play sport which could require them to take convenient clothes. The actual clothing could place more pressure on their shoulder than casual clothing.
In conclusion, the benefits and harms of uniform eventually counterbalance, so it depends on hobbies each person. Personally, I opined that the school should have to balance clothing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'stresses'?
Suggestion: stresses
...no time preparing for school or find it stress to figuring out whole night about accou...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'emphasized'.
Suggestion: emphasized
...ate the environment where discipline is emphasize, hence school would built punishment wh...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...ipline is emphasize, hence school would built punishment which could be applied to ot...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...earners would not be excited to wear it everyday, notably they enjoy outdoor activities ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e school should have to balance clothing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18153846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73696761325 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636923076923 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5196838353 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.4 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121455265358 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450371193414 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363254635185 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723378131851 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187382307424 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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