A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents. Why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents.
Admittedly, due to increased road accidents, legions of people lose their precious lives everyday. Various reasons are incorporated with this trend;many remedial measures, if adopted and followed, can mitigate this problem to a great extent.
To begin with, one of the primary reasons of increasing fatal road accidents is rash and reckless driving. People nowadays are always in haste whenever they commute to their workplaces or homes. So, to arrive on time, they tend to drive fast and recklessly.Consequently, it leads to severe road mishaps and death. Moreover, People not only drive fast but they also use mobile phones while driving and get easily distracted from roads and become prone to accidents. Apart from this, the dilapidated roads and ill-conditioned vehicles also contribute towards the increase in road accidents. In many developing countries such as Pakistan and India, the condition of some roads is extremely bad and to avoid the potholes, the vehicles have to apply brakes abruptly and it causes serious vehicle damage and collision with other vehicles. Ultimately, it results in increase in the death rate. In addition to this, extreme weather conditions such as heavy rainfall,fog, and snow are equally responsible for rad accidents. For example, recently due to heavy rainfall and floods in India, many people lost their lives in serious road accidents.
Moving further, to alleviate this problem of increasing fatal road accidents, the most effective measure is to initiate counseling at schools and colleges. Educational authorities should encourage the students to use more public transport to avoid accidents and for their own safety. Moreover, the government or NGOs should increase awareness among people for road safety by organizing some road-safety campaigns and programs. With these campaigns, people can learn about the safety measures to follow, traffic rules to follow, and how their contribution can help in reducing the road accidents. In addition to this, government should enact stern rules and laws to follow and anyone who breaks these road rules should be given severe punishments. Apart from this, increase age for the issuance of license would also helps in reducing the road mishaps as there would be more mature and responsible drivers in the roads.
In conclusion, by considering the given information, reckless driving and dilapidated roads are the significant reasons for increasing death rates due to road accidents. However, some effective measures such as road-safety campaigns and strict rules can be put forth to curb the number of road accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44334975369 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90442009982 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524630541872 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4228550406 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.315789474 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360381427957 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119144948103 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707906124619 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232694713363 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784129646584 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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