In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what you extent should children have to follow the rules.
Give reasons of yours answers and include any relevant example from your knowledge and experience
Some nations have enforced stern clauses for the behaviour of adolescents like restriction on web surfing , prohibition on child labours, participation in sports etc. . However in others countries children has no any restrictions and have option to do desired work. In my point of view children should have to obligations like acquire education, follow traffic rules, avoid bad habits.
To begin with, there are plethora of logics why growing-up acquire some clauses and regulations . Firstly of all it is imperative that every children should use internet under observation of teachers and parents. Some website may lead as bad influence like smoking, drugs additions. Therefore authority have implemented law that the someone age under 18 can not use the restricted websites. A part from that the child labours prohibition law has been applied in almost all developed and developing nations. This practice can save the childhood. Participation in sports is necessary in some nations. For example In CHINA every child has to take part in any game has compulsory according to law which has been applied from 2005.
Furthermore, the education should be compulsory for teenagers thus the certain characteristics can develop good citizens. Secondly management has introduced some traffic laws that restrict juveniles to use automobiles except bi-cycles. Moreover the government has an onus to provide safe and secure environment to habitants. In this regard the rules and regulations are applied by government to avoid crime activity and these are also applicable on children.
To sum up, no doubt there are some nations that not apply any restriction on children. Although some rules and regulations like traffic rules, education, web surfing can develop certain manners of a child that will be valuable for both personally and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40069686411 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93540445025 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0850757303 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186872732145 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597759583046 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635685262064 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124766861606 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783750579286 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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