Your company is going to give a special course for your staff. Your manager ask you to find if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
W.A.L to manager of the conference centre
1) Give detail about course
2) Describe what equipment you will need for course
3) Ask for further questions about the facilities at conference centre
Dear sir,
This letter will find you in radiant and superior health. I am writing this letter to seek information about reservation and facilities provided at your conference centre on behalf of “XPREESS LOGISTICS” company. A one week tutorial programme for personality development is being organized by HR branch on July 20th.
As your conference centre is fully equipped. However, we have need for cordless mic to conservation of one on one query. Secondly, the requirement of a digital voice recorder also will be on prior base, hence the company has to review the whole course later. The headphone should also be provided if any employee have demand.
Moreover, the course will be run on both morning and evening slots. So please provide information more about setting arrangement, refreshment facility, reservation time, charges, CCTV surveillance and rest room availability, It would be conveniently for our staff if you provide detail of public transport.
I am look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
GS
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-10-21 | gspreet1010@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng organized by HR branch on July 20th. As your conference centre is fully equippe...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rvation time, charges, CCTV surveillance and rest room availability, It would be ...
^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you soon. Yours faithfully GS
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35151515152 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07902647608 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.721212121212 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0336582388 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20601688388 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805829095826 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792362223252 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985742650069 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532938831929 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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