Since the last decades people are preferring to get married and have children in their thirties. How is this a positive or negative development. What is your opinion.
From past few decades, the tendency of first childbirth after marriage, has been substituted by couples. Due to demand of acquire job position, well-settlements and financial backup, individuals prefer to have their children in late age. However, this aspect holds both merits and demits views. This write up, will discuss both views before evaluating final assessment.
To begin with, as a planning for infants, it is imperative to have adequate financial support of parents, therefore some people prefer to acquire job position and income as well. This aspects helps to secure the future of a child as parents have enough money to fulfil the basic needs such as education, nutritional and health. Secondly, some women do jobs as equal to their opponents, hence the first childbirth would be delayed. But the contribution of their wages will intensifying the income of family. This phenomenon may lead the strong family relationship and boost the economic family budget.
On the other hand, due to some disease and change of hormones, sometimes it become difficult for a woman to have pregnancy after age of thirty. For instance, a survey has been held in UK regarding care dilemma. In this the married women who were above age of thirties and having no children, having certain illness . Moreover, these disease has developed due to taking birth preventive pills and medicine at earlier age. A part from that, the precarious job and some private firms do not allow paid leaves, thus the women may leave without pay during holidays.
To sum up , nowadays, newly married couples give first priority to life-settlement at earlier age, afterwards do plan for child, However, this may be correct at some levels. In my view, individuals should do focus on financial setup firstly then for to have newborn. It is also necessary to sort out the later age dilemma with proper plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68065242728 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635483870968 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9288994147 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3529411765 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8823529412 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146715588604 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457339117693 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484686588389 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911025797014 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318035565015 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.