The adolescence stage of any human being is a fabulous part of his/her life as one has to bear almost no responsibility and parents are guiding while the realities are unfolding. Some are of the view that the younger age is the splendid era while others believe that the adulthood bears more fruits despite the burden of duties.
The adolescence stage of any human being is a fabulous part of his/her life as one has to bear almost no responsibility and parents are guiding while the realities are unfolding. Some are of the view that the younger age is the splendid era while others believe that the adulthood bears more fruits despite the burden of duties.
In the early age, every child is the responsibility of his guardians as they want to see him as a productive member of the society. Additionally, the parents love teenagers out of their affection and want to provide them with all facilities of a life which they themselves have aspired for. There are almost no responsibilities towards earning a livelihood, as a result, they become dependent on others which might nurture a careless attitude. Furthermore, the behavioural and mental traits are developing because of which the sound judgment of the circumstances lacks.
The adulthood is the prime time of a human’s life as he is filled with passion and energy to do something while presenting a fresh perspective to the society. An independent life wherein the adult can do almost everything without seeking a permit from anyone, instils the confidence in oneself. This is why he/she starts taking ownership of their lie and the resultant decisions. The grown person becomes entitled to the things which were prohibited because of his age, for instance, the driving etc.
In the end, I strongly feel that the adulthood is the prosperous period owing to independence in thinking, earning a livelihood and the power of the passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... his age, for instance, the driving etc. In the end, I strongly feel that the adu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96400210782 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6150528426 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413758146599 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13599344268 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21744004612 0.0667982634062 326% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258474502803 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.330995286235 0.056905535591 582% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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