The chart below show the reasons why some people want to leave the UK and work in other countries and why some people want to stay in the UK.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart compares five main reasons that cause people to either live a life in the UK or leave the UK.
Quality of life is the most important reason for people to left the UK. Most of people chose to live a life in the UK because of their families or friends.
37 percentage of people left the UK due to the concern of life quality, which is over two times of the amount of people left for employment. The second popular reason for leaving the UK is financial problem, occupying 24 percentage of people, and two times of people for weather issue. Family or friends ranks fifth for left the UK with a number of 9 percentage.
43 percentage of people decided to stay at the UK because of their families or friends, which is over two times of the number for social lifes. The other three attractions for people to stay are financial reasons, language and empolyees, occupying a number of 15, 11 and 10 percentage respectively.
- The chart below shows the number of students from four different countries applying to a European university Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Art classes like painting and drawing are important to students’ development and they should be compulsory in high school.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The chart below show the reasons why some people want to leave the UK and work in other countries and why some people want to stay in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 66
- the chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. 78
- Some people want the government to spend money looking for other life on other planets, but others think it is a waste of public money, because there are many problems need to be solved on the earth.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...rtant reason for people to left the UK. Most of people chose to live a life in the UK because ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51764705882 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52519484328 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476470588235 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2403086214 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2227617646 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126382470797 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572758948182 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171738584307 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052428839374 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.