People think that old buildings should be knocked down and given way to the new buildings. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? how important are old buildings to us?
From our ancestors, we have inherent culture and traditions on which our whole existence is based. Building are part of this culture which, now-a-days, do not interest people anymore. Some school of business advocate that the old buildings should be demolished so that the buildings with the modern architecture can be constructed. Partly, I agree with the former notion, however, the buildings with historical background should be preserved.
Admittedly, the old architectural buildings hold an intrinsic value in our culture. Archeologists are able to understand the culture of the region merely by understanding the way the buildings are constructed. For an illustration, Pyramids constructed in Egypt describe plenty of things about that nation. Apart from that, for any nation, old buildings can promote tourism and establishments can earn plethora of revenue from this industry. 1 million people visiting Taj Mahal in Agra is silent example of this.
However, seismic zones have been changed and intensity of earthquakes has been increased. This change make old buildings unsafer for living and lot of causalities can occur because of this. To substantiate it, in Kolkata, India, 100 people died because of failure of building due to an earthquake which was constructed in 1910. Further more, modern architecture is safer and more attracting. With the pace population is increasing, skyscrapers will be the only option so that basic facility of house can be provided to everyone.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that old buildings are unsafe and should be demolished but the ones with emotions must be saved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...hquakes has been increased. This change make old buildings unsafer for living and lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37354085603 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99581078915 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5576103343 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326962403539 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107130043396 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858692536863 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212426096461 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059119272555 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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