Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what way has technology affected the type of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
It is undeniable that nowadays with developing the technology, the interaction among people has been altered significantly. Some of this change is good and others effect on social life negatively, in fact I reckon every individual technology has the related-effect.
This day’s relation and communication among people has been affected by technology in diverse manners, which, Virtual media could be defined as the most widespread. In other word, rarely are we able to find people who do not know anything about it. Invention of internet, programming and cell phone in succession make a condition for birthing of contemporary Cyberspace. Therefore people are able to make telecommunication with each other at the moment virtually. Moreover, modern data sending and receiving devices make a condition for awareness. People this days with using of their modern TV are conscious of the recent occasions.
I think technology has the same positive and negative effect on our life. In fact distance has been eliminated as well. For example you could use different application in your cell phone and cope with limitations such as distance and time and find your friend everywhere. In addition technology help people to have scientific references more and also we could make a connection with the best scientist of a specific field by E-mail. Nevertheless, negative impact also exist. Moreover People extend their time in net media and related devices more than usual. In addition with increasing the usage of net, people are less willing to read books. Apart from what has been said, the control of cyber-social media is harder and condition for spread the gossips has been provided.
Therefore I could infer technology help people for consciousness and better communication by diverse devices, but lack of culture of effective usage of this technologies has the related negative effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are rarely
... as the most widespread. In other word, rarely are we able to find people who do not know ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...or birthing of contemporary Cyberspace. Therefore people are able to make telecommunicati...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... make a condition for awareness. People this days with using of their modern TV are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ime and find your friend everywhere. In addition technology help people to have scientif...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...vertheless, negative impact also exist. Moreover People extend their time in net media a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...and related devices more than usual. In addition with increasing the usage of net, peopl...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...spread the gossips has been provided. Therefore I could infer technology help people fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t lack of culture of effective usage of this technologies has the related negative e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, i reckon, i think, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33110367893 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00195497127 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3474735159 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291001416 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914915450519 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658052487968 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183946315901 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457807010429 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.