Your neighbour burns his garbage near your house. Write a letter to him and include the following:
1) complain about the situation.
2) Explain about the affects of his actions on your family.
3) Suggest a solution.
Dear Mr.John,
I am writing to complain about burning garbage by you near my detached house at 756 Oawl street. Even last night, I had witnessed this situation as someone from your house, probably you burning litters near my house walls.
Your inappropriate actions whipped us to languish to inhale atrocious smoke emitted by open fire of garbage. Let me tell you health problems which smoke can induce are numerous. Moreover, I have small children in my house. The havoc of your insane habit might cause problems to my loved ones'. The toxic elements culminates even to cancer as one of it detrimental effects. In fact, it is also difficult to make children understand why you are doing this gloomy activity when there are so many talks on contemporary deteriorated ecology.
It is very laudable by me and other neighbours if you put your garbage into rubbish bins. Though I am aware that it can cause you more money,however it will be very well seen by us and even help you to maintain good environment.
I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours' faithfully,
Vinod Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, I am writing to complain about burnin...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'culminate'.
Suggestion: culminate
...ms to my loved ones. The toxic elements culminates even to cancer as one of it detrimental...
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Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...m aware that it can cause you more money,however it will be very well seen by us and eve...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72977044322 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691489361702 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1542010211 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191054277758 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071328979267 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636903674312 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10110567388 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067940349071 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.