The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individual?
The current environment is plagued with various problems such as pollution, overpopulation, terrorism etc. Although many of these issues were detected at initial stages enough was not done to contain the negative effect of the same. This essay will discuss, who has to take the ownership to solve these critical issues facing the mankind.
There has been a trend of various governments, organizations and individuals blaming each other for the problems that endanger the mankind today. However, governments of various countries have greater role to play in resolving these issues. Governments have the authority to introduce and enforce laws that can solve some of the global problems and also have the necessary funds to run awareness programs. For example, government of China curtailed population explosion in the country by enforcing one child policy. Hence, governments are better positioned to mitigate these dangerous problems.
Solutions to grave global threats are complex and governments alone cannot solve the same. It will need the support of like-minded organizations and cooperation from citizens to enforce the same. For example, countries take the help of United Nations Organization to address issues concerning global terrorism. Nevertheless, these organizations or individuals have neither the power nor influence to bring in a noticeable improvement in the problems faced by various countries.So, it is the government of each country who has to take the lead to curtail the problems faced by mankind.
This essay discussed about who has to take the ownership of solving global problems which may endanger the environment. In conclusion, governments should take the responsibility to eliminate the dangers faced by the world and make the earth a better place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, may, nevertheless, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51094890511 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01723078379 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2491036868 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213957184801 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719322217232 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610183024534 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129991381705 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221280385639 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.