A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to contribute my opinions regrading the sponsor projects from the company.
According to sponsoring the sports team for two years, this is such a great investment on local children. It not only helps children to improve their physical and metal health but also reduce financial burden for the city.
Regarding the musical concerts, the local citizens can enjoy those events that will reduce stress after a long working day. There was no any concert organized in the public for almost 2 years, so it is good chance to warm up cultural activities like this.
From my sentiment, I would prefer spending money on local sports team because children development is a vital of importance rather than any others. When the children playing the matches, Adults can go to stadiums to enjoy the competitions that also can be a good way to relieve stress.
Finally, I would like to express your kind sponsorship on our city and I wish the company will grow rapidly in the near future.
Best Regards,
Quang Nguyen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to contribute my opinions r...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ess after a long working day. There was no any concert organized in the public for...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... I would prefer spending money on local sports team because children development is a ...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...idly in the near future. Best Regards, Quang Nguyen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86516853933 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51178261149 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702247191011 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4927342306 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25051272473 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899531928751 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931183889409 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116068329474 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822201132307 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.