More and more people are moving to the urban areas, and therefore many cities are now becoming increasingly over-crowded. Provide solutions to deal with this issue.
It is generally true that nowadays urban sprawl has become increasingly important in society, with an increasing number of people flooding into the city and placing strains on infrastructure. In this essay, I will try to figure out corresponding solutions to deal with this issue.
Fortunately, there are solutions and one such is that governments could allow urban development to happen at the edge of the city. If more houses are built and there is qualified education and adequate medical care services readily available for citizens, then this could alleviate the pressure of the urban center to accommodate people from rural areas,in turn leading to a more sprawling city and less population density.Given this, it is unsurprising that many metropolitans now choose this strategy, which prompts the governments to invest heavily in order to improve people’s standards of living.
Another is that governments could try to develop regional economy to encourage people to come and stay. A pertinent case in point is Orana, which stretches across the Central West and Western region of NSW with agriculture being its predominant industry. As Orana tries to attract skilled immigrants by issuing permanent residency visa, and as such, this encourages young talents to seek employment opportunities in Orana, instead of staying in Sydney. What this means is that persuading talents to stay in rural or regional areas can be an effective means for the government to properly deal with overpopulation in the city.
In conclusion, there are indeed problems brought by people pouring into the city and fortunately corresponding solutions to deal with this thorny issue. It is well advised that local councils should provide incentives for citizens to stay in rural areas, in order to narrowing the gap between regional and urban economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , in
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Given
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3676975945 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96472970594 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.044893129 50.4703680194 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.2 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.9669160288 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339391976505 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118074138126 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861681175298 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207597849124 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852205957519 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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