You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends Tell your friend about your birthdayExplain how much the visit would mean to you.Suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit
Dear Steve,
I’m writing this letter to invite you for my birthday on coming weekend at my house. I have invited only few of my close friends. It’s my 25th birthday which is so special to me as it was going to happen in my new home.
I want this birthday to be my one of the most unforgettable event. We are planning to celebrate my birthday in a very grand fashion along with the house warming function. All my family members will come to this party. I know, you are quite busy with your work schedule but I want to be on my side as it’s very important to me. We are planned to arrange a buffet for lunch and dinner with variety of dishes as I have foreign friends.
Also, you can come couple of days early to my home and we will have all the arrangements made for your visits. It’s an opportunity for you to meet my whole family and to stay along with them. I have talked about you to my parents and they are very pleased to meet you in person. I’m expecting your presence on my special day.
Thanks in advance and meet you in person.
Your sincerely,
Arumoh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3640776699 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34248829033 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3543620511 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2142857143 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197183716235 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864906181036 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647348046978 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11914711011 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531542180364 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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