In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, humans are facing many health problems due to the high consumption of fast food. Some say that, in order to address this situation, governments should levy a higher tariff on this food type. I completely side with this idea.
To begin with, imposing a higher tax will radically stop people from buying too much fast food. If sellers are charged more by the government, they will have to increase the price of high-calorie products to maintain the margin profits. This makes customers hesitate when buying this type of food because there are other options that cost the same or even cheaper. In Korea, for example, there used to be an outbreak of fast food on the streets in 2012, however, since the higher tariff in 2014 forcing sellers to increase prices, the consuming rate has been vastly reduced.
The reduction of using fast food also creates a subsequent impact on companies and sellers. Even though they attempt to keep the same profit by raising the food price, the loss of a substantial number of customers still costs them a massive amount of money. These fast food suppliers will then have no choice but change to selling other non-taxable foods, which are usually healthier, or cut down the production of high-calorie foods. For instance, many local vendors in Ho Chi Minh City selling French fries and hot sausages have stopped their businesses due to poor sales of high food price after the announcement of tax increase from the government in 2015.
In conclusion, a stronger levy by the authority will definitely prevent the mass consumption of fast food these days. As a result, health problems caused by this concerning issue could be effectively solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95422535211 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54176334473 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6777681017 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316136063371 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109469522285 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673036975809 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190395260879 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456399507079 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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