Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in recetn years despite the potentially harmfull effect they may have on our health and on society. Goverrnments should introduce measures to restrict ownership of mobile phones to those who need them for their work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that the number of mobile phones has significantly increased last years and this number will probably continue to rise also in the future. Some people say that this trend has to be stopped by government restrictions, because cell phones have a negative impact on society. In this essay, I am going to show whether it would be a good idea or not.
Nobody can argue that many accidents, especially traffic accidents, are mostly caused by mobile phones, because people are less concentrated, when they are calling. We can also often see and hear the ringing phones in restaurants, th...
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