Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reason for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Invincibly, Youngsters are looking for new job opportunities incessantly, in order to meet their desperate necessities to survive. Though this pattern is in trend with multitude of newcomers, yet there are multifarious drawbacks associated with it. The following paragraph will enunciate multifarious views on aforementioned notion and tells why disadvantages outweigh its advantages.
To commence with, in order to flourish or enrich their professional career along with proliferating income; as a consequence, youngsters frequently change their chores throughout their professional life. This is due to the fact that many people feel stagnant in their current jobs. Indeed, these few instances of curtailing from mundane tasks bolstered their desire for new jobs with augmenting salary. In addition, in fact, this unrelenting nature of changing jobs among certain demographics of society helping them to be more flexible and abets them to handle hectic hours of critical chores.
Contrastively, this tendency of switching jobs has also brought number of ills in its wake. Many big firms hesitate to hire such people, the reason being they feel imperil in loyalty and stability issues of such proponents. There have been plethora of recorded examples where many companies denied capable candidates due to their frequent job changes. Secondly, because of person's stint in various field over time would make them less expert in particular field. Though, advancement to new jobs are lucrative manner to step towards higher salary, yet people have to suffer later for this.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that advantages are pale in comparison with disadvantage and it clearly shows that disadvantages outweigh the advantages due to certain drawbacks associated with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97365967347 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5677832012 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265641773189 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858421885244 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416920761643 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14100762208 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546808673436 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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