Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while other think it is waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Emphasising on the children’s growth has become more and more crucial factor of overall society’s improvement. Some argue that apart from the existing academic subjects art also should be made compulsory, whereas others thinks inclusion of one more criteria to examine would not be beneficial to near future. In my opinion, art has its own benefits which will improvise individuals mental capability and hence should be added in the education system during school.
Some people debate that the existing education system is already outdated and children are not able to receive the appropriate knowledge. The old-fashioned ways of learnings have diminish the out-of-the-box thinking capability of children. In these situations, one should think of enhancing the existing educating ways rather than introducing new and unnecessary subject which will eventually distract/restrain pupils from being concentrated towards academics. For instance, if any of the students starts loving playing guitar, he or she might regularly prefer to play it rather than studying their other subjects.
On the other hand, having art as a fundamental subject in school would make children more innovative in all aspects according to the remaining concerned people. Arts plays a major role in kid’s mental development and enhancement. Art can rejuvenate everyone. For instance, drawing a favourite picture or creating a handmade craft once in a day would definitely revitalise the brain. Singing a song for some time would make the mind fresh and would surely help to resume the unwanted yet important study to continue with more concentration. This will reduce the stress level which is nowadays hampering the overall innocence of the child.
According to the various points discussed above, it is obvious that everyone is concerned about the child’s improvement and growth from schools days, however, people should understand that the art is actually a beneficial factor. Therefore, I believe, Art should be considered as a one of the fundamental subjects in schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'diminished'.
Suggestion: diminished
...he old-fashioned ways of learnings have diminish the out-of-the-box thinking capability ...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ite picture or creating a handmade craft once in a day would definitely revitalis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54889589905 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05533166738 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618296529968 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2048452263 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231630645892 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704991009086 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388630174397 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134455337365 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123284324293 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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