Trend of having baby late
It is true that the trend of giving a birth in the later period in life gains an increasing popularity. This essay aims to explain some main causes of this phenomenon and show various potential influences on individual family as well as community as whole.
There are many primary reasons responsible for why more young people decide to have baby lately with their partner. One of these reasons is to take more time to concentrate on pursuing their studies as the top priority. In the modern life, earning money and living an affordable life is becoming more and more difficult which could lead to the significant change toward the young’s determination on the road of reaching a well-paid job as the solid background for a bright and hopeful future. Another cause of this issue is that the young people always think that they only live once. Delaying the childbirth allows them to have more time to enjoy their youth comprehensively with countless fantastic and appealing opportunities before officially reaching a strong family commitment.
Thanks to this breakthrough in the way of thinking, this tendency brings many undeniably positive impacts in terms of both family and society. Gaining a great job with stable income and having a high socioeconomic status in the early stage can help the young people to make sure that they are able to bring up their offsprings without facing any financial burden. This would like to enhance the happiness of their family life which contributes considerably to the rich prosperity and powerful generations for community. In addition, having children later in life offers a golden opportunity for people to accumulate enough essential knowledge, awareness and experience about the importance of parents, process of educating and nutrients for babies. This is an really crucial factor leading to the high-quality workforce for the whole community.
In conclusion, there are various main causes that result in the popular decision of having children late among the young people in recent years and this trend also brings many great influences on each family and our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17441860465 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77768282994 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572674418605 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0529799237 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154208205856 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530986545927 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782284820711 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990023326834 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596489277622 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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