Some people think that having a set retirement age( 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation , is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
With the inception of modern era, controversial debate is going on regarding the retirement age as establishment has set it as 65 years. Some people concern that for many working sectors, it is not fair as such high age as they believe that, by the passing age their body deteriorate and they are unable to handle stress. However, many others opine this and want fix retirement age. I am in support of former view point and believe that retirement age should be set regarding the physical demand of job.
Admittedly, all jobs require different type of meets as in some jobs there is intensive physical load such as infrastructure etcetera while there are others in which there is plethora of psychological load. Comparing both such types of jobs is completely un-adequate. For illustration, employees of computers field have a sitting job and they develop physical problems related to their backbone, while army men undergo intensive training and there problems are related to whole body. Hence, retirement should be set according to their job requirements.
There are plethora of workers who should be retired early. Employees working in field should be benefited with the early pension. Indian Army has done a remarkable job in this regard as they allow employees to get pension at early age. Apart from that, people working in management should be allowed to work even after their retirement as they have gained a vast experience and nation should benefited from that experience.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that there are many sectors whose employers should be allowed to retire at early age and authorities should take some positive actions in the support of such employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07473309609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73549994375 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5436536271 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25493241655 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100285011206 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485140486884 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157748305983 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709530620919 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.