It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Living beautiful things and sharing the our best moment is always suporting by our friends, no matter if they are older friends or new friends. We maybe would not enjoyed the life, If have not had our friends. Pesonally, I believe that knowing new friend and keeping in touch with older one is perfect relation in life. I think in this way because of two main reasons, that i will explore in this essay.
Firstly, making new friends gives us the possibility to emerge new experience and profit from new ideas. The communication with new people help the development of the skills and knowledge. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When i was a student, already I have had two closer friends and one of mine friend invites me on the party where i knew new friends. This new relationship help me with my exams by learning together and discussing our problems. So, the scores at school was increasing and we were lucky knowing each other and becoming new friends.
Secondly, Knowing new people helps living on new country, with different language and new culture. For instance, two year ago I went to study in Italy, where I was not able to go anywhere or buy things. At school i knew one girl, her name is Era, whose support me to learn the Italy's language. The most important thing was that she learn me how to go in different place in Italy for not missing the classes for being late. Hence, without the help of this new friend, I would not continue living in Italy.
In conclusion, Is big step in life to know new people and make them friends. Improving our knowledge and skills is the important thing on knowing new people. New friends are grant support for our live such as the older on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52427184466 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42775397849 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7375048352 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254746523784 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886130214916 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803164148022 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175243493825 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451389641833 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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