Look at the maps showing how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007 , and summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The supplied protraits depict the development of Harborne in given time period.
In 1936, the north-east part contracted blink area with a river, looked like backword side.Moving further to down east-south side, it had large farming land which was used for farming purpose and on the opposite of farm land it had a autherity offices, it was quick nice old building.At south-wesr side, it depicted a cycle path which qas used for for going one to another place by cycle.At the final west-north part it depicted big trees.At the centre of given map it exhibited number of buildings such as in north side it had sweet-shop and further from that a batchers shop on the opposite of batchers shop it showed a library which was used by students and citizens for taking knowledge regarding needs.At south, it depicted a bank and west of bank it had flower shop. Post office was located at west-north side and centre area was empty of this centre part.
After 71 years later, the riverside was totally changed because number of citizens migrated here and government made it residential area with the help of delivered facilities.Moving downword from residential area, the farm land constructed a playground for golf player and the buildimg of government house converted into museum for providing knowledge to individuals.The cycle path converted into road to save their time with help of vehicles and at west-north side exhibited less number of tree as compared to past year.At the middle of supplied map, the sweet-shop and butchers shop were cambined and gave name to it supermarket.Library and bank did not changed from its place but travel agent office was located at the place of flower shop.In the west-north part of centre post office also did not changed by government.Centre of it changed into shopping centre.
Overall, in 2007, the Harborne city totally altered as campared to former year because government invest big budget of money on it to deliver amenities to citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 340.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82647058824 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5632873403 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476470588235 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1466956698 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149200392399 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560436491906 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296810356282 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829542127117 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300702467896 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.