Do you think extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. are dangerous and should be prohibited?
Undoubtedly, people have started following the sports like skiing, water rafting, and skydiving. These games are in trend, and umpteen people are participating in these. These games have numerous benefits and drawbacks at the same place. It depends on the way anyone follows these. This essay will discuss some of the positive and negative aspects of this topic.
To begin with, extreme sports like skiing and water rafting help a person to feel lively. These days, everyone is extremely busy in their life that they do not have time to enjoy. These games provide the opportunity to every individual to relax and enjoy the life. It has observed that people that are more adventures in their life have more chances to achieve success.
Despite the benefits, there are certain drawbacks to these sports too. These games are extremely dangerous as there is always life threat in it. Even a small negligence during these games can cause death. Moreover, people participate in these activities for the sake of adventure. They sometimes do not follow the instructions appropriately. The recent reports show that majority of accidents during these games are due to the lack of knowledge or because of the unawareness of the instructors.
In the end, in my opinion, these games can be dangerous as well as entertaining. Thus, these events should be under the supervision of experts and the medical facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12554112554 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66146819998 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8338363628 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6470588235 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5882352941 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156325400432 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544762132583 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718915748152 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101408250987 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319029809658 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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