In countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Unemployment rate is higher in some nations, and some people think that studies should be compulsory up to primary school only not secondary school. Studying up to primary school only will limit the knowledge of children’s rather than if they study up to secondary school. In my opinion, I completely disagree that education should be limited up to primary school.
Generally, primary schools are for setting up the fundamentals of education and they do not make students ready for employment because their knowledge is not sufficient. Moreover, there is a significant amount of difference in level of logical thinking in a primary school pass out and secondary school pass out. This often leads to generate low level jobs instead of high level jobs. Technical skills, is also a major factor which is very low in primary school students. Therefore, primary schools are best for only laying the foundation of education.
Despite the extra efforts needed to pursue education in secondary schools, they are totally worth it. They improve the skill set of a student which ultimately leads to employment. In addition, they also builds the character of an individual which helps them in their personal as well as professional life. Education in secondary schools is more advanced as compared to primary school which enhances the capability of students. It also encourages them to start their own venture rather than working for someone else which will lead to generation of more jobs.
In conclusion, secondary education is necessary to construct the building blocks of education and ultimately, it will lead to more job opportunities. Therefore, students should be encouraged to study up to secondary school rather than completing education at primary level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...s to employment. In addition, they also builds the character of an individual which he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30604982206 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87866262294 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512455516014 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1031880652 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392503712033 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151636256456 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118378897934 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263492239788 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115960213617 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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