Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology has a crucial role in child's knowledge and development. In fact, it is important that every child use this facility in a best possible way to get the maximum benefit. Some people probably say that technology has decreased the creativity of children because of only considering the negative sides of technological advancements. In my opinion however, technology has improved the creativity of children in modern world than the past due to variety of reasons.
First of all, technological innovation provides children with numerous sources to expand their horizon of knowledge. The child who is equipped with this extra information is more likely to apply it to his day to day life, thus gets more creative ideas. For example, a student gathers a lot of information from internet for his assignment about plant morphology. It is most likely that he refers Encyclopedia, Pub med and various online journals to get more elaborate picture of his assignment.Those extra knowledge will definitely help him to come up with very unique and attractive plant morphology model. While, in the past students had no access to internet or any technological innovations, thus their chances of presenting more creative work was very less. Hence, technology enable children to access more information, thus making them more creative.
Secondly, technological innovation help kids to get connected to the whole world. These connections help them to share and obtain new ideas and concepts of what they deal with everyday. For example, toady most of the kids have Gmail, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram accounts. They are using these services to connect with each other. My elder daughter who is in India regularly e-mails her professor in US to get more information about the project she is dealing with. She told me that it is only because of her professors guidance, she is able to make her project more creative and impressive. Thanks to the instant Gmail services, which provides quick and valuable connection all around the world. When I compare my school life with my daughters, there was no Gmail or any social networking sites, so there was less chance for me to get a broad perspective of information. Thus, kids of today's world are equipped with many networking sites, which is indispensable for a creative work.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that technology plays a major role in making children more creative than they were in the past. This is because of various information provided, and social networking channels possible through today's technological innovations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22168674699 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95042505137 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534939759036 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7196524865 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.19047619 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183952044445 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606142031737 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057082112858 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132600772861 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371794090069 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.