Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Some people think children creatived in the past beacuse children had different way to thinking. However, they believe that technology reduces their creativity, but children ideas and thoughs are given shape by technology. According to them technology has influence on children thinks about creative thinks such as imagetination cababilities. But other people defend to technology has good impact on children beacuse technology improve their creavite skills. For instance, technologies give them unsolid thinks such as a computer game. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement beacuse of reveal reasons and I am going to explain it with some examples.
Technology has imagenation side which is give great oppurtinty to chidren. For example, a computer game has great impact to develeping children thinking. When I was a child I had played very much play station one which is kind of console game and I got creatived form this console game, despite I had not relaesed it. I remember to I had great creatived skills than my student friends and my teacher told my family your child had great abilities to create a stories. In other words, I could wrote very different kind of tales. For instance, I had usually written about fantastics books. and video games had great influences on my think and books.
Also when I compare with past and nowadays. I can say easly children has more abilities in the past. As children had only chance play on the street or park in the past. In these days they had just think own their own for dream something but children had huge advantegous today beacuse they live more develeped world and it is give them chance to more creative.
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Suggestion: a story; stories
...our child had great abilities to create a stories. In other words, I could wrote very dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96797153025 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64872937038 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533807829181 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3891147952 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1176470588 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204304724578 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726816957007 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500762845443 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147469529431 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784519909538 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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