The table below gives information on interest use in six categories by age group. Describe the information in the table and make comparsions where appropriate.
The liner chart reveals that information of representation on the network use in six types in the chart.There are all age group involve comparsion where appropriate.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration there have six categories toddlers and dwellers use the activity in their life.Hence, age group interest get news teenager and old age 70 to 76. Therefore, online games are like to toddlers. It is high ratio in the chart.Afterthat, adolescent are interest to download film in the cell phone in 52 percent.But, dwellers have fall down ratio download film because they do not interest download film.
To trigger with, teenager do not like search the product onliine.Moreover, they have reduce the ratio in 0 proprotion.Otherwise, 40 age group interest to reasearch product in 83 percent. Finally, buying a product are same ratio to teenager and old age .
To sum up, toddlers are very active play games for online website. Dwellers are interest to product research and buying a product they have increase ratio in the chart.
- The graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer.The graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer.The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average englis 78
- Some people think that women generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive To what extent you agree with this 39
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 56
- Factory farming is becoming a major revenue carcer in many countries.what are the advantages and disadvantage of factory farminG 61
- Advantages and disadvantages of internet 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, moreover, therefore, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16568047337 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20342053346 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.827625303 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19229413731 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808233423434 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09490303087 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127533206989 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995881565178 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.