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negative and positive effect on international tourism
There is no doubt that some tourism countries always become the center of attention to visit, especially international tourists. In the recent year, more of countries are opening their door to welcome tourists. Some people believe that tourists enable to help the local trade. Otherwise, not a few of them criticized with the negative influence on pricing of local product. This essay would consider international tourism todays which describe both of advantage and disadvantage.
To begin with, the tourist trade is vital for some economies. One of the crucial effects is investment t...
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Sentence: One of the methods that government suggests is expand the export and reduce the import.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and expand
Sentence: The increasing tax make the company goes up the price of their product.
Description: The fragment tax make the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: The tourists will be extracted to some incredible tourism country and they will spend their money too much just for relish it.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and relish
It will be developed the trade of the country
the trade of the country will be developed
Tourism not only can reach a high country’s financial, but also tourism can solve the issue of the country.
Tourism not only can reach a high country’s financial, but also can solve the issue of the country.
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