Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society.
In the past, people were living in a extended family, but in recent times, this trend is declining day by day. As a result, the number of nuclear families is increasing. This also weakening the kinship bonds among the families and family members. There are several reasons behind this, the major two reasons are professional career and recreational activities.
One of the major cause that the relationships between families are decreasing because of professional career development. They want to develop their carrier to live a sound and luxuries life. Thus, they are always busy with their work, even they do not spend anytime to contact with their relatives. They spend so many hours incessantly to earn more capital. Therefore, this professional life causes the alienation within families.
Another reason for declining the closeness among families is the development of recreational equipments. Family members are now always busy on either watching television or surfing the internet in their smartphones. A recent survey by BCN (Bangladesh Cable Network) showed that, nowadays, a majority of people spending their time surfing the social network in their smartphones. Because of this, people are now more fascinate about virtual life rather than the real life. They also now contact their relatives via the smartphones instead of face to face meetings. Therefore, the bonding between families and family members becoming more artificial.
To sum up, nowadays, it is indispensable fact that carrier oriented life styles and recreational activities detached people from their families and family members. We should avoid such type of activities, otherwise, its negative consequences will impact on our life and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
In the past, people were living in a extended family, but in recent times, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48314606742 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83486211482 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5950758085 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1176470588 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189823131316 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643720633728 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518715370418 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122710285898 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682320595176 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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