Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Vegetarianism is increasingly gaining popularity among certain communities and religious groups due to some belief that eating meat can be harmful to their health. Though there may be some effects to health by eating meat, it may not be practical for every one of us to be vegetarians for that reason.
Firstly, over a period of million years of human evolution, humans turned out to be omnivorous, which means that they depend of both plant and animal sources for their food intake and the human anatomy and biology also has evolved to facilitate that. Secondly, the human physiology is such that, it cannot acquire the entire protein requirement of the body by plant proteins alone which lacks certain amino acids, the building block of proteins that are present only in animal meat, therefore it is not always healthy to be self-sufficient on plant proteins alone. Thirdly, animal meat is a great source of other essential nutrients of human body such as Iron, Vitamins, Calcium etc. without which human body cannot survive, unless taken externally as supplement.
On the contrary, the adverse health effects of meat are mostly a product of over consumption of various kinds of processed meat with many additives and preservatives, and not “solely” because of meat consumption. Even certain vegetables, if over consumed, can be detrimental to health, for example, over consumption of cabbage can lead to thyroid gland disorders including cancers.
As such, it can be concluded that everybody becoming vegetarian due to the concerns of serious health issues is not supported evidently by science and evolution. And even if somebody wants to be a vegetarian, their food consumption should also be regulated in order to avoid health problems of vegetarianism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24912280702 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9543901321 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8167416645 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.6 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18696684031 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805990506078 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640884350892 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128372104469 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695653565251 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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